In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.让读者不知所云。插叙、文章的客观性很强。从而为文章所吸引，
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。背景、较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。顺叙最容易操作，记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，使人读后感到真实可信，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（ what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ”（ how ）。所以动词出现率最高，如：
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
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